Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的好朋友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；

2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；

3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。

注意：1.词数：100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。（适应：adapt to)

Dear Susan,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Susan,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my suggestions. Now my suggestions are as follows:

Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. I believe by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope these suggestions can be very useful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是写给前不久随父母去美国的好朋友苏珊，对于她在美国的生活学习不顺心的状态，给她一些建议。成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 内容完整，陈述写信背景以及完整表述给苏珊的建议。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作目的（知道她在美国生活学习不顺心很难过；给她鼓励）；第二部分：给她建议（用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly使表述流畅）；表达期待（给她鼓励，告诉她一切都会好起来的）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：宾语从句的使用I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America；多次使用非限制性定语从句Secondly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.；Thirdly … ,which will make your life more interesting and colorful as well as broaden your horizons.。2.使用了过渡词语：Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等。3.使用了重要短语：adapt to适应；make friends交朋友；as well as以及。