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下面是21世纪报中学生英语双语版 (Student Times )刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编辑Henry的身份给这位中学生写封回信。
Dear editor,
I am a new student in Xin Hua Middle School. I hardly talk to my classmates. Sometimes I do want to talk, but I don’t know what to talk about and how to begin a conversation. I feel so lonely. And I spend most of my time studying but I find it’s more difficult and tiring than before, especially spoken English.
Could you give me some advice?
Yours,
Tom
注意：回信的内容包括以下要点，可适当增减细节
1保持微笑，这在与人相处中很重要；
2与同学们友好相处，多交流相同爱好或相互讨论学习问题；
3英语越来越重要；学好语言需要有信心，多开口说；
4可以通过多种方式，如……，让校园生活丰富多彩。
词数120左右。信的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：自信的 confident adj.  
丰富多彩的  colorful  adj.
Dear Tom,
Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you………
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yours
Henry

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you.
First of all, you should have a smiling face. As we can experience in our daily life, one smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any words. Your smile will show that you are friendly to them. What’s more, you can talk about the same hobbies or discuss your study with them.
By the way, English is playing a more and more important role in our daily life. In order to master a language, you must be confident and practice speaking more. There is no doubt that studying is tiring, but you can make your school life colorful by having sports，and …….
Best wishes.
Yours ,
Henry

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