Question

【题目】随着经济（economy）的发展，越来越多的家庭拥有小汽车，因此，放学时，家长接学生的车辆总会导致校门口的交通过度拥挤，学校对此非常苦恼。假如你是高一年级的学生李华，请给骆校长写一封信，分析一下该现象产生的原因，并提出你的建议：1．鼓励同学们汽车或是坐公交车上学；2.提醒家长有序停车；3.各年级可以分时间放学。

注意：100词左右；开头已给出，不计入词数。

Mr. Luo,

I’m writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Mr. Luo,

I'm writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

With the development of economy, more and more families begin to have cars of their own, which contributes partly to the problem. Besides, some parents always try to park their cars as close as possible to the school gate, without taking anything else into consideration.

In order to solve it, I firmly hold the view that some effective measures must be taken. First, I think it necessary to call on all the students to go back home by bus or by bike. Second, if they have to be picked up by their parents by car, they'd better remind their parents to park their cars in proper places. Finally, it might be helpful to make students of different grades leave school at different times.

I hope my suggestions will be useful to help solve the problem.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】书面表达题考查的是学生对英语的应用能力。写作时应注意：要点要齐全；时态要使用准确，关键的词语和句型要写正确，可以适当的运用高级词汇和特殊句型，但是应避免犯低级错误，注意卷面整洁，行文流畅。

【范文亮点】

1.文中运用了taking...into consideration；as...as possible 等短语增加了文章的亮点。

2.文中使用了With the development of ...；In order to...；they'd better...等句型，使文章连贯又有特色。

3.文中用了which引导的定语从句With the development of economy, more and more families begin to have cars of their own, which contributes partly to the problem。