Question

此题要求改正所给文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横上画一个勾(√)；

如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；

       此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；

       此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

       注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Mr. Smith,

       I appreciate your help very much. On the first day of                   1．         

the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After          2．         

that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired                      3．         

to me to join in the activities. As a result, I gradually got to know          4．         

the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer,            5．         

my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back               6．         

to school as the new person. My grades improved. I became                7．         

very active so made new friends. Today, I got a letter that                    8．         

said I had been admitted to a college. I am pride of myself. I just         9．         

want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.             10．         

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,

       I appreciate your help very much. On the first day of                   1．   √    

the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After          2．   me    

that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired                      3．  special 

to me to join in the activities. As a result, I gradually got to know          4． 去掉第一个to

the other campers. Because ∧ the help you gave me that summer,        5． Because of

my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back               6．  went    

to school as the new person. My grades improved. I became                7．     a    

very active so made new friends. Today, I got a letter that                    8．   and   

said I had been admitted to a college. I am pride of myself. I just         9． proud  

want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.             10． become