Question

第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）

    81.假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1.英语学习的目的
	2.英语学习的方法
	3.课外自学的途径
	……….
对学校英语教学的建议	（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。

    注意：

    1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

    2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。

    3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

 Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.                         

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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my

experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally lt’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows

vocabular is an important part of language, just like bricksin a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

  Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned ln order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally，1 suggest we have more Endish activities，such as English contests and festivals.

    Thank you for listening.                              (150words)

解析:

【思路点拨】本文是一篇发言稿。考生首先需简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，再根据自己的经历与感想对学校今后的英语教学提出建议，谈谈自己的看法。注意要适当地增加细节，以使行文连贯。在写作过程中，对主题要审准，审清，另外在提建议的时候，注意语气要委婉。力求做到详略得当，结构清晰，若能灵活多变地运用一些复杂句式结构，力求不单一，这样就可以使文章锦上添花。

【范文点评】范文审题准确，内容充实，能包括所有的要点，在最后提出了几条合理的建议。层次分明，结构清晰。语言地道，且过渡自然流畅；一些高级词汇、固定短语和灵活多变的句式如“As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building.”,“Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.”等的应用都彰显了作者较扎实的英语基本功。