Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulty in their lives.” I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the six to present the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judges made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly, clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

Answer 1

【答案】1. its→whose

2. difficulty→difficulties

3. of去掉

4. contest前加the

5. choosing→ chosen

6. six→sixth

7. How→What

8. have→had

9. wildly→wild

10. such→so

【解析】在本文中作者讲述了自己参加市演讲比赛的情况，演讲的话题是“People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”。作者认真地准备了这次演讲比赛，最后荣获了演讲比赛一等奖，他永远也不会忘记那一刻。
小题1. its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.分析结构可知前后两个句子中间没连词，city speech contest,是先行词，在定语从句中作定语，所以可以把its改为whose成为定语从句，故答案是its 改为whose。
小题2. 人生当中会遇到很多困难，名词用复数形式，故difficulty改为difficulties。

小题3 I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. 介词of后只跟名词，代词动名词做宾语，不跟陈述句做宾语从句，think认为，think of考虑，小题4. Then I carefully prepared for contest. 此处的contest是特指上文提到的演讲比赛，故contest前面加定冠词the。
小题5. I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! 句子主语I 和谓语动词之间是被动关系，应该用被动语态，所以把choosing改为chosen。
小题6. I was the six to presenting the speech. 表示第几个用序数词the first、the second、the last等，故six改为sixth。
小题7.。How a relief when I finished it ! 感叹句中对名词进行感叹需要用what，句型：what +（形容词）名词+主语+谓语，所以把How改为What。
小题8. had and announced that I have won first prize. 主句谓语动词是一般过去时，宾语从句应该用过去时的相应形式，根据文章内容可以判断应该用过去完成时，故have改为had。
小题9. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! 动词go在句中是系动词，后面应该跟形容词做表语，故wildly改为wild。
小题10. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it. 在such/so…..that句型中，such 修饰名词，so修饰形容词和副词，故such改为so。