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13．作为一名中学生，你在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等．请选择一个话题，用英语描述一段经历，并说说你的想法．字数：100-120字左右．
A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．I've learned this from my own experience．
Once before a test，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered around，writing something excitedly．I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，"My friend in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you the right answers!"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her"generous"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，"We needn't follow them．"
To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．Never should we keep bad company．．

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分析 本文是开放式作文．在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等，根据所给信息选择一个话题写一篇短文．写作要点：描述一段经历，阐述想法．写作时人称用第一和第三人称．时态应该用一般现在时和一般过去时．重要短语：reliable companion （值得信赖的同伴），get lost （迷失），share sth with sb （与…分享某物），pat sb on the shoulder （拍某人的肩膀），keep sb company （陪伴某人），learn sth from （从…中学会．）．

解答 A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．【高分句型】I've learned this from my own experience．（引出话题）
Once before a test，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered around，writing something excitedly．【高分句型】I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，"My friend in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you with the right answers!"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her"generous"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，"We needn't follow them．"【高分句型】（举例）
To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．【高分句型】Never should we keep bad company．【高分句型】（总结升华）

点评 类似这种开放式作文可遵循以下写作步骤：首段：议论，引出主题，点出观点．第二段：记叙文段落，举例子．第三段：议论，总结升华观点，回应开头．同时写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．