题目内容
新年即将来临,你打算用攒下的零花钱给父母买一件礼物。请以 “A present for my parents”为题写一篇文章。该文必须包括以下内容:
1.你送的礼物:一张健康俱乐部的贵宾卡;
2.你父母亲的现状:父亲是教师,工作很辛苦;母亲喜欢读书,但缺乏运动;
3.你送该礼物的原因;
4. 该礼物对他们可能产生的影响和带来的变化。
注意:1. 文章应包括以上所有信息;
2. 词数;100左右。文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
A Present for My Parents
The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present. ________________________________________________________________________
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A present for my parents
The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.
As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.
I want to express my love and thanks to them by giving them the present. I think they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope they will enjoy better health.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求以“A present for my parents”为题写一篇英语短文,作文的主要内容是用零花钱给父母买礼物。写作要点包括:礼物是一张贵宾卡;父母的现状;送贵宾卡的原因;礼物将给父母带来的影响等方面。词数在100词左右,注意开头不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文涵盖了所有的写作要点,也进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了宾语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:非谓语动词spending most of his time working with great efforts at school;宾语从句①that they will find time to do more exercise,②they will relax in the health club and make more friends,③they will enjoy better health等,语法知识运用娴熟,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用but, as I grow up, With the health club membership, at the same time等词和短语来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了dive into, piles of, do exercise, both of, grow up等短语,使作文的内容变得充实。
考点:命题类材料作文