[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua. I am writing to apply to be volunteer to take care of our school flowers and trees during the winter vacation.I believe this job suits me perfect.

On the one hand, that I am fond of is growing flowers and I have the experience to look after the flowers and trees well. On the another hand, it is not far from my home to our school. However I have enough time to work, which was a great advantage over other students. I’m convincing that as a volunteer I can do the job more better.

Thank you very much for read my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,

【答案】

【1】文中第二句 volunteer 前加a

【2】文中第二句后半句 school改为 school's

【3】文中第三句 perfect改为perfectly.

【4】文中第四句 that改为what

【5】文中第五句 another 改为other

【6】文中第六句 however改为Therefore

【7】文中第六句 was改为is

【8】文中第七句 convincing改为convinced

【9】文中第七句去掉more

【10】文中第八句 read改为reading

【解析】

【1】文中第二句 volunteer前加a。Volunteer志愿者，名词。名词前加冠词a表示一个…。结合题意李华是要成为一名、并且只能成为一名志愿者。所以要加a

【2】文中第二句后半句 school改为 school's。表示有生命的东西的名词及某些表示时间、距离、星球、世界、国家等无生命的东西的名词后加 ’s来表示所有关系，叫做名词所有格。School是没有生命的，所以表示所有关系的时候要加’s.

【3】文中第三句 perfect改为perfectly。形容词不能形容动词，而副词主要用来修饰动词,形容词,副词或其他结构，位置在be动词、助动词或情态动词之后，实义动词之前。如果实义动词后有宾语，则放于宾语之后。实意动词suit后面有宾语me所以perfectly放在me后面。

【4】文中第四句 that改为what。考察主语从句。That引导主语从句时候后跟一个完整的句子做主语，而what是在主语从句中做动词的宾语。主语从句只有在不缺少主语,宾语或表语时,用that 引导。

【5】文中第五句 another 改为other。考察固定结构on one hand…on the other had。通常用来说明两个方面。不能用another来替换。

【6】文中第六句 however改为Therefore。结合语境来看，该句此处应该是顺承关系而不是转折关系，故将however改为therefore

【7】文中第六句 was改为is。文章的基本时态是一般现在时不是一般过去式，所以要将was改为is。该句意思为：因此我有足够的时间去工作，这是我于其他学生的最大优势。

【8】文中第七句 convincing改为convinced。固定结构有be convinced +that从句。这里用过去分词表示被动，表示“我”是被说服的。

【9】文中第七句去掉more。考察比较级。Good的比较级是better，不需要在前面加more。该句意思为：我认为成为一名志愿者，我能把工作做得更好。

【10】文中第八句 read改为reading。考察固定结构。Thank you very much for +doing sth，这个结构中for是介词。该句意思为：非常感谢您阅读我的申请。

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