暑假即将来临.你班同学就假期计划进行讨论.提出了不同看法.请根据提示写一篇短文.并谈谈你的看法．优点缺点待在家中花费少.舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识.开阔眼界花费多.旅途不便注意: 1．词数100左右． 2．短文必须包括表中所列要点.可根据内容分段表述． 3．可适当增加细节.以使行文连贯．参考词汇:眼界horizon T 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法．

	优点	缺点
待在家中	花费少、舒适方便	不能亲身了解外界
外出旅游	增长知识、开阔眼界	花费多、旅途不便

注意：
   1．词数100左右（不含已写好部分）．
   2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述．
   3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．参考词汇：眼界horizon （view）
The summer holiday is coming．Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday．

分析本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法．请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从呆在家中和外出旅游的优缺点两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in favor of 支持；What's more而且；However然而；broaden their horizons拓展视野；In my opinion以我的观点来看

解答 The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday． Some are in favor of staying at home．（高分句型）They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．（高分句型）But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．
However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．（高分句型）But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（高分句型）
In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．（高分句型）

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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14．However/No matter howgreat the difficulty is，a student with a strong will will never give up．

11．最近你所在的英语倶乐部就元宵节是否应该放烟火（set off fireworks）进行了讨论，请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文介绍讨论情况并发表自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上．

赞成的理由	1．放烟火庆祝元宵节是我们的传统； 2．增加节日气氛．
反对的理由	1．浪费金钱； 2．造成空气的污染； 3．带来安全隐患上．
你的看法	…

18．They are living in the company for the moment because their own house _________．（　　）

	A．	is decorating		B．	has been decorated
	C．	is being decorated		D．	has decorated

8．Sometimes people add to what they say even when they don't talk．Gestures are the"silent language"of every culture．（31）D．
In the United States，people greet each other with a handshake in a formal introduction．The handshake must be firm．（32）G．Friends may place a hand on the other's arms or shoulder．Some people，usually women，greet a friend with a hug．
（33）A．When two people talk to each other，they usually stand about two and a feet （69centimeters） away and at an angle，so they are not facing each other directly．Americans get uncomfortable when a person stands too close．If this happens，they will move back to their space．If Americans touch another person by accident，they say，"Pardon me．"or"Excuse me．"（34）E．If you don't do so，it means you are bored，hiding something，or are not interested．But when you are staring at someone，it is not polite．
For Americans，thumbs up means yes，very good，or well-done； thumbs down means the opposite．To call a waiter，raise one hand to head level or above．To show you want the check，make a movement with your hands as if you are signing a piece of paper．（35）C．Americans shake their first finger at children when they scold（训斥） them and pat them on the head when they have a good opinion of them．
A．Space is important for Americans．
B．American leaders often look very serious，who seldom have smiling faces．
C．It is all right to point at things but not at people with the hand and the first finger．
D．It is important to know the body language of every country，or we may be misunderstood．
E．Americans like to look at the other person in the eyes when they are talking．
F．Smile is the most universal expressions in the world．
G．If the handshake is weak，it is a sign of weakness or unfriendliness．

15．近年来许多名校成为旅游景点，这引起了广泛的公众关注．为此你班展开有关"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"的讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息，给China Daily报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表白己的看法．

反对者	影响在校学习的学生，分散其注意力；大量游客涌入校园，会带来安全隐患．
赞成者	拉近学生和社会距离，利于文化交流；一些大学已成为社会文明的象征，应该让人们去感受那里的气氛．
你的建议/看法	…（至少谈两点）

注意：1．词数：150左右．信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计人总词数；
2．短文须包括表中的全部内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Editor，
Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern．

Best regards，
Li Hua．

3．Most drinks stating that they are fruit-flavored（水果口味）contain no fruit at all，while most of the rest contain only a small quantity of fruit，according to a study carried  by the British Food Commission．
"Shoppers need to check the labels（标签）before buying drinks，"said Food  Commission spokesperson Ian Toke love．"Food production is highly competitive．（71）D It will increase profits，and consumers won't always realize they are being tricked．"
    Researchers analyzed the contents of 28strawberry-flavored products sold in  stores．（72）C   0f the 28products，eleven of them did contain strawberries，five of them contained less than one percent real fruit and the rest contain no fruit at all．In  addition，each juice box contained nearly eight teaspoons of sugar．（73）BLet's take jam as an example．Some strawberry-flavored jam was labeled as containing no artificial  colors，flavors，or sweeteners，but it contained absolutely no strawberries at all．
    （74）G Consumers have the rights to know clearly about what they have bought  Under current UK law，food packages do not have．to distinguish between natural and  artificial flavoring．"Describing a product as strawberry flavor and covering the surface  of the packet with pictures of strawberries is misleading．（75）FUnfortunately，it is  also legal and widespread，"Tokelove said"It's time to take measures to protect the consumers'rights．"

A The products which contain real fruit are popular with people．
B．Even products advertised as more natural often contained no fruit．
C They found that about 60percent of them didn't contain any fruit at all
D．If companies can cut their costs by using flavoring，they are likely to do so．
E．It is important and necessary to demand a small amount of flavoring in the products
F．Actually the product contains just a tiny percentage of strawberry or even no fruit at al1．
G．The Food commission suggested all flavors used in a product should be listed on the packaging

4．The seven Cs of a good letter
What is the secret of writing a good letter？Here are two main ones．Don't try to be fancy．Don't try to impress your reader．You will be successful if you follow these seven Cs．
Clear．Use short，direct sentences．（71）CTalk as if the reader were right there with you．Above all，don't use an introduction．
Correct．（72）EDon't guess，even for spelling．Refer to your dictionary．If you need to，check a reference book too．Use them as much as you need to．
Complete．Don't scatter our points．（73）GThis is good organization too．
Courteous．Be friendly rather than overly casual．Present your information nicely even if you are complaining about something．In all letters，treat others as you want them to treat you．
Concise．Make each point as clearly and briefly as you can．
Conversational．This is really the secret of good writing，（74）ASuch a letter has a natural，friendly tone．Let your personality come through naturally．
Considerate．（75）BWrite about what you believe the reader needs or wants to know．Try to be helpful．This will build good feeling toward you．
The seven Cs are about writing letters．But how about school papers？Use the seven Cs．Write as if you are talking to your teacher or professor．You'll be surprised．You'll almost instantly become a good writer．And you might even enjoy writing from now on

A．Just"talk"to the person
B．Think of the readers'point of view as you write．
C．Make them easy to understand．
D．Include long sentences in your letter．
E．Make sure what you say is correct．
F．Writing should not be taken too seriously．
G．Finish one point completely before going on to the next．

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