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6．假如你是某外国语学校学生李华，第九届金砖国家峰会（The Ninth BRICS Summit）将在你居住的城市举办．组委会现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员．请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信．内容包括：
1．个人情况：年龄、性别；
2．个人条件：英、法语爱好，关注时事、政治和经济，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地；
3．本人承诺：提供最佳服务．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir and Madam，
     My name is Li Hua．
I would like to serve as a volunteer for the coming The Ninth BRICS Summit．
I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student ata Foreign LanguageSchool and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
I believe I would do a good job at the Summit．First of all，Iam fond of politics and economyand I know the city very well； secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Summit．（高分句型三）
Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your reply．

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，第九届金砖国家峰会（The Ninth BRICS Summit）将在你居住的城市举办．组委会现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员．请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，注意要适当拓展，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First of all，首先；secondly其次；make a promise作出承诺；look  forward to盼望
   I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student at a Foreign Language School and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
Secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）
I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
     My name is Li Hua．I would like to serve as a volunteer for the coming The Ninth BRICS Summit．
     I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student at a Foreign Language School and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
     I believe I would do a good job at the Summit．First of all，I am fond of  politics and economy and I know the city very well； secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Summit．（高分句型三）
     Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．