Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，是校刊记者。请你为校刊写一篇英语短文，介绍最近在我国很多城市发生的雾霾（haze）天气。请参考以下要点：

1. 危害；

2. 原因；

3. 如何自我防护。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. It is one of the most dangerous weather conditions. Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What’s worse, it also affects our health. If breathing in haze, people may feel uncomfortable and get ill.

The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sites.

In view of the above, we do need to protect ourselves from haze pollution. First of all, in case of haze pollution, neither should we open the windows nor take exercise before the sun rises and after sunset. Besides, we’d better wear masks when we go outside. What’s more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to diseases.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文为任务型作文，要求从三个方面来介绍雾霾：危害；原因以及如何自我防护。此类作文考查了学生的阅读能力、理解能力和表达能力等综合能力。要求学生作文条理清晰，内容必须包括这三个方面，并用句子来分别阐述这三个方面。

写作亮点：本篇观点明确，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：后置定语caused by haze，定语从句The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sites，时间状语从句等。What’s worse, In view of the above，in case of， build up等词汇First of all，Besides，What’s more等连接词的运用为文章增色不少。