Question

Please describe one of the most impressive, unforgettable or interesting outings, trips or journeys that you’ve ever made alone, together with your parents or close friends within 120 words in total.

请你描述一次你独自一人、和你的父母亲或者好朋友一起进行过的、令你印象最深刻的、难忘的、或者有趣的旅行，120词左右。

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Answer 1

One of my unforgettable journeys that I’ve ever made is the one to Sanya, Hainan Island together with my parents. Both Mother and I were full of excitement because neither had ever flown before. Aboard the airplane, I was taking pictures and chatting with other members of the tourist group. Climbing out of it, I smelled the fresh air, the salty sea winds and the smell of seafood. I could hardly wait to taste some. Unexpectedly， I did. As the leader of our group, my father had arranged some colleagues to go to a large nearby market to get some local and typical seafood and asked a good restaurant to cook and stir-fry them for us. How delicious and tasty they were! And none remained.

The following day, we went to several beautiful and romantic beaches. The most exciting and challenging part was that I went scuba-diving with my parents, where I saw many colorful fishes of all kinds and sizes swimming around us, seemingly welcoming and chatting with us. What fun it was!

On the third day, we went to visit a large farm where we saw and tasted some local fruits, especially coffee with different flavors. I came to know the process of producing and making coffee and why it had been so popular throughout the world. I took many pictures with the working farmers there.

On the fourth day, we visited one of the world-famous scenic spots-Tianyahaijiao for the whole day. I felt extremely excited when I finally managed to find the two separate parts of huge stones standing/lying at the most southern tip of China. To my surprise, there were a large number of elderly and young couples standing on or in front of them, promising to each other that they would love forever until death, never part. Later, explained by Father, I knew what it meant. How I envied them! I insisted that my parents should have a memorable photo taken too. Meanwhile I suddenly felt so small standing on the top of them. Anyway my fantastic dream came true.Then and there, I was determined that I should make a number of visits to this paradise in the years to come.

Believe it or not, I often have dreams about it.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述一件事情来反映主题，所以要用一般过去时。但本文必须用第一、三人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如to my surprise，come to know，还运用了what引导的感叹句，that引导宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：meanwhile等等。

考点：材料作文