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书面表达（满分25分）

时下，很多学生带手机上学。为此，你班组织了主题为“中学生是否有必要将手机带到学校”的讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，给某英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表自己的看法。
注意： 1. 信的开头已为你写好；2. 词数：100左右。
3. 参考词汇：联系—communicate    干扰—disturb      紧急情况—emergency
Dear editor:
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether cellphones are allowed in the
 
school.____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor:
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether cellphones are allowed in the school.
The majority of the students think that it is very convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a cellphone. And what’s more, they can call for help in case of an emergency.
However, a small part of students think that it is not necessary because some students who have cellphones will play games, receive and send messages in the classroom and the dormitory, which disturbs the teachers’ teaching and the other students’ rest as well as their study. Besides, it is a waste of time and money.
In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable. But as middle school students, we should put all our heart into our studies.

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