题目内容
【题目】你是一名高二年级学生。你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜,白天也不安排休息时间,但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡;有些同学饮食习惯不好,不吃早餐。请你写一篇发言稿,在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间,注意健康饮食,保证学习好、身体好。
注意:1、发言稿须包含上述要点,但可适当发挥,使讲话完整通顺。
2、100词左右。
Dear classmates,
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.
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【答案】
Dear classmates,
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently, I have found that some of our classmates study late into night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either, but they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.
In my opinion, it is extremely important for us to have enough sleep and proper diet. We must learn to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.
Thank you for listening.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出;写作时可联系自己的经历添加一些内容,但不可遗漏要点;注意要使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章还运用了宾语从句that some of our classmates study late into night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either;定语从句which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health. It作形式主语,不定式是真正的主语;倒装句only in this way can we keep fit and study well. spare any time,cannot help falling asleep,extremely等词汇及In my opinion等连接词。