Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余 的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers are good. We are getting in well with each other. However, there exists some problems. Some students are easy to lose his temper because of anxious and study burden. They sometimes quarrel with others, which is very disappointed.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improving the situation. First, we should respect of other people. Second, when we are not feeling happy, we can chat our friends or teachers or even parents, It is likely whether they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

Answer 1

Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers are good. We are getting in well

                                is                on或along

with each other. However, there exists some problems. Some students are easy                                                     

exist

to lose his temper because of anxious and study burden. They sometimes

     their               anxiety

 quarrel with others, which is very disappointed.

                            disappointing

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to

improving the situation. First, we should respect of other people. Second, improve

when we are not feeling happy, we can chat ∧ our friends or teachers or

                                   with

even parents, It is likely whether they can understand us better and give us

                    that

some reasonable advice.