题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,打算明年出国留学。请你根据以下要点提示,给你的美国笔友Lucy写一封电子邮件。
1. 出国留学的打算(如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等);
2. 出国留学的原因;
3. 期待与她见面。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右(开头已给,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
How are you?_________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
How are you?
I’ve decided to study abroad next year. Before applying for a degree course, I will first spend a year focusing on my English, which I think is beneficial to my further study. Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment, I’d like to live with a host family, which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture. As for the main reason why I want to study abroad, the academic benefits come first. Secondly, it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad, because I will have to do everything on my own.
I am looking forward to seeing you then. And I hope you can give me some advice on what I should prepare in advance. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】此文为提纲类作文。人称可用第一人称,时态可用一般将来时和一般现在时结合。
此文的要点有:1. 出国留学的打算(如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等);2. 出国留学的原因;3. 期待与她见面。
亮点分析:
高级表达:applying for a degree course,focusing on, is beneficial to my further study,instead of living in student accommodation,live with a host family ,give me the chance to learn more about the new culture,academic benefits
使用高级句式:I will first spend a year focusing on my English, which I think is beneficial to my further study.(非限定性定语从句)
Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment, I’d like to live with a host family, which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture.(分词结构,非限定性定语从句)
As for the main reason why I want to study abroad,(定语从句)
it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad, because I will have to do everything on my own. (省略,原因状语从句)
