Question

中暑是非常普遍的一种疾病，严重者可以危及生命。请根据图片内容并结合自己所了解的常识，写一篇介绍中暑以及如何对中暑患者进行急救的短文。

参考词汇：中暑heatstroke；抬起elevate；保持呼吸通畅maintain an open airway

 

Answer 1

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Heatstroke is an illness caused by being in great heat for too long. The most important characteristic of heatstroke is the high body temperature.

Care should be centered on lowering the body temperature as quickly as possible. Failure to do this may result in death. The right first aid measures for heatstroke are as follows：

First, have the victim lie down and elevate his or her feet. Be sure to maintain an open airway of the victim. Then，try to move the victim to a cool environment. After this, apply cold and wet towels to the victim and use a fan to lower his or her temperature. If possible, have the victim drink some water or something like that. The last but most important step is to transport the victim to the hospital in time.

【解析】

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