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18．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Last year，my family moved to a new city and I went to study in a place where I

had no idea about anything．As time was passed，however，I made some friends

who were the coolest in whole world．They were so amazed that I couldn't imagine

life at school without her．I never thought of have a so-called best friend，but later I

meet one．She is the kindest girl I have ever known．She never believes all the bad

things other tell her about me．Wherever I am down，she does many funny things to

make me happiness．Anytime we mess up but fight，we always get together again

soon．

分析 本文主要讲述作者搬到了一个新城市，去一个完全陌生的学校上学．随着时间的过去，作者结交了一些自认为很酷的朋友，但都不是最好的朋友．后来，作者结识了一个自己认为是最友好的朋友，她不相信别人告诉她的关于作者不好的事情，每当作者沮丧时，她做许多有趣的事情让作者高兴．

解答 Last year，my family moved to a new city and I went to study in a place where I
had no idea about anything．As time was passed，however，I made some friends
who were the coolest in∧whole world．They were so amazed that I couldn't imagine
life at school without her．I never thought of have a so-called best friend，but later I
meet one．She is the kindest girl I have ever known．She never believes all the bad
things other tell her about me．Wherever I am down，she does many funny things to
make me happiness．Anytime we mess up but fight，we always get together again
soon．
详解：
1．去掉was 考查动词语态．time与pass之间是主谓关系，用一般过去时的主动语态．
2．加the 考查冠词．the wholewhole后接名词时，应把提到的东西作为一个整体来考虑，而不是指部分．
3．amazed改为amazing 考查现在分词．现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征．
4．her改为them 考查代词．them指代前文提到的some friends．
5．have改为having 考查动名词．of是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
6．meet改为met 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．other改为others 考查词语用法．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用代词others作主语，意为"别人‘，other是形容词．
8．Wherever改为Whenever 考查连词．根据句意：无论我什么时候沮丧时．用连词whenever．
9．happiness改为happy 考查形容词．根据句意：她做许多有趣的事情使我高兴．用形容词原级作宾语补足语．
10．but改为and 考查连词．mess up与fight之间是并列关系而非转折关系，用连词and．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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G．The first invasions were by a people called Angles about l，500 years ago．
9．Everyone wants to be a great person，kind and caring．But for some，that?s not always the case．（36）C A few of these harmful characteristics are listed for you below．If you happen to realize that you possess any of them-quit!
You are self-centered．Many people do this unconsciously．You think you are the only one that matters，and often don?t care what others have to say．If this is you，it?s time to change．（37）G    You are always in competition．Are you the person who has to be better than everyone else？If so，you?re unattractive．（38）A If they overcame their fear of heights

and climbed 10feet in the air，don?t say，"That?s all？I?ve climbed 30 feet!"Instead say，"That?s wonderful．I?m really proud of you．"
（39）E You are definitely unattractive when constantly asking why others don?t see you as important as you think they should．For instance，your two friends went somewhere without you．It doesn?t matter to them，but to you it does．Get over it．Your friends?lives don?t stop when you?re not around．
You are the boss．（40）B If you?re the one always making decisions，needing to be in charge，or trying to control what others are doing，you?re acting in an unattractive way．

A．You should let your friends have their moment．
B．In a group of friends，everyone should be on an equal playing field．
C．There are many behaviors making people unattractive or annoying．
D．You are unreliable，yet dependent upon others．
E．You question your importance to others．
F．People seen as unattractive are often in fights with their friends．
G．No one wants such a friend as only cares about themselves．

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