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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The old saying “The early bird catches the worm” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, the most people must plan ahead and work hard to overcome all kind of difficulties.

That has been my own experience, either. When I first started at high school, I seldom passed my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr Black, advised me plan everything in advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice to practice, I can now easily pass all my exams.

There are no direct roads to succeed.

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【解析】第一处：考查动词形式 观察全文是一般现在时，又因为the old saying 为单数，因此show 应该为 shows.

第二处：考察副词 working hard and trying constanly. 努力工作不断尝试 constantly 修饰trying 因此constant 应改为 constantly.

第三处：考察定冠词 .To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead为了达到更好的结果，大多数人会提前规划，大多数人为复数，不是特指，因此应删除the.

第四处：考察短语difficulties 为复数 all kinds of 各种各样的……，修饰复数，因此将kind 改为kinds.

第五处：考察副词，too，也，用于肯定句；either,也，用于否定句或疑问句。That has been my own experience 为肯定句，因此将either 改为too.

第六处：考察短语 pass my to exams 通过我的考试。因此加to.

第七处：考察因果关系 前面说我很少能通过我的考试，是因为我从没准备好。为原因状语从句，因此将so改为because.

第八处：考察逻辑关系 前面说Mr.Black，因此知道是男的，因此将She改为He.

第九处：考察几次搭配 put his advice into practice把他的建议赋予实践 因此将onto 改为into.

第十处：考察短语there is no shortcuts to success.成功无捷径。To后应用名词形式。因此将succeed 改为success或succeeding.