Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将来中国旅游。他对中文名字非常感兴趣，并且很想拥有一个中文名字，他向你求助。现请你给他写一封邮件，包括以下内容：

1. 介绍中文名宇的特点；

2. 给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。

注童：1. 词数100左右，文章开头和结尾己给出，不计人总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China. There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country.

A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. Unlike an English name, the family name is usually put first. And then a given name follows. As you’re kind, smart and energetic, I think Li Yang is most suitable for you. The family name is one of those shared by the largest number of Chinese. The given name means the sun in Chinese.

I hope you will like your new name and have a really good time in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为材料作文。要求介绍中文名字的特点并给美国朋友取一中文名，以及取这个名字的理由。

亮点本文内容安排合理，结构完整。文中运用了大量的短语，如“consists of ，carry some special significance or expectations，be suitable for…”等，让更加文章丰富多彩。文中复合句与简单句交互使用，句式较为灵活，尤其是复合句运用的熟练，如文中运用了宾语从句（I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China.和I hope you will like your new name and have a really good time in China.）；同位语从句（There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit …）；非限制性定语从句（which often carry some special significance or expectations）和状语从句（As you’re kind, smart and energetic, I think Li Yang is most suitable for you）。句式灵活，增加文章的可读性。