Question

【题目】你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现面向全社会招聘志愿者。

要求：

1.具有为国际友人服务的热情。

2.掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者。

3.具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。

假如你是李华，请根据以上要求，写一封想当博览会志愿者的申请信。字迹工整，100词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

生词：国际贸易博览会the International Trade Exposition

Dear Sir or Madam,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. With the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like to be a volunteer very much.

All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.

To sum up , I believe I can be a qualified volunteer . I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.

【解析】

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