Question

【题目】假设你是李华，校英文报举行题为“我最喜欢的幽默大师---卓别林”的征文比赛，请你投稿参赛。

要点：

1.简要介绍卓别林；

2.谈谈你喜欢他的原因。

要求：行文流畅，适当添加细节，字数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Charlie Chaplin, master of nonverbal humor, was born into a poor family. When he was young, his father died, leaving the family even worse off. Therefore, Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother. Even if he led a hard life, he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters, such as the little tramp, who encouraged many people in need.

The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows. Firstly, he worked hard to achieve his dream. Secondly, he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining. What’s more, his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble.

In general, I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin.

【解析】这是一篇人物类命题作文。联系题干，以此为中心内容进行选材。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.要分析题干，围绕题干进行选材，在写作思路方面，题目要求写幽默大师卓别林，所以我们可以将他的外形、性格还有代表作简要介绍一下。

2.要点要齐全，将题目要求的内容罗列完整，重点对他进行简要介绍并列明喜欢他的主要原因，要注意层次结构，注意上下文的衔接。

3.注意时态与语态，全文以一般现在时为主，描述第三人时要注意动词形态的使用。

【范文亮点】

1.文章采用了“have to do sth不得不做某事”“ take the responsibility担待”“manage to do设法做某事”“the reason why所以”等高频短语。

2.文章采用了“Therefore、In general、What’s more、Even if”等连接词使文章更加层次，连贯通顺。

3. who encouraged many people in need，在句中，出现了who引导的定语从句。