Question

英语写作能力在英语交流和考试中非常重要，今天你的英语老师Mr. Zhang在课堂上讲了如何提高英语写作能力，如：熟练掌握2000多常用词汇；适当背诵一些美文；坚持每天练习写作等等。请根据他的建议并结合你的实际写一篇英文日记。

内同要点：1. 英语写作能力的重要性。

2. 你的老师关于写作训练的建议。

3. 你自己提高写作能力的有效方法。

写作要求：1. 词数100词左右。

2. 日记格式和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

April 23, Wednesday Fine

Today Mr. Zhang, our English teacher, told us how to improve English writing skills.______________

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

April 23, Wednesday Fine

Today Mr. Zhang, our English teacher, told us how to improve English writing skills. The ability to write in English is becoming increasingly important in English communications as well as in the examinations. Thus, it is worth focusing our attention on.

In order to write a good essay, we should, as Mr. Zhang said, have an excellent command of over 2,000 frequently-used English words. It’s necessary and useful for us to read or even recite more beautiful English articles. Besides, as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”, so we should take every possible chance to write in English.

According to my personal experience, keeping a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim. I hope Mr. Zhang will advocate it in our class.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见的短语as well as也，和；be worth doing 值得做某事；In order to为了；According to根据；In order to write a good essay, we should, as Mr. Zhang said, have an excellent command of over 2,000 frequently-used English words.这个句子中in order to 表示目的状语，have an command of 掌握；Besides, as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”, so we should take every possible chance to write in English这个句子中运用高级连词besides, as the saying goes非限制性定语从句，还运用到谚语；According to my personal experience, keeping a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim.这个句子中动名词做主语；

考点： 提纲类作文