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第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假设你叫李华。你的朋友Mike 是一名高三学生，他最近有点烦恼，因此写信向你求助，请根据目前的情况（高考临近，压力大，晚上学习到很晚，白天上课不能集中精力，身心疲惫，学习效率不高……），给他写封信，提出你的建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计词数）
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear that you are feeling upset these days. ______________________________________                                 
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear that you are feeling upset these days. As a Senior 3 students, it is quite common to feel a little anxious with the college entrance examination approaching. Here come my suggestions on how to handle your problems.
First of all, you should take a positive attitude as some balanced stress can help motivate your study. Never mind sometimes you are a little slow in your daily learning for lack of sleep. Secondly, keep a balanced diet. Eat more energy-giving and body-building food, which is of great benefit for your body and brain. Besides, take outdoor exercise regularly to stay energetic so that you can study efficiently. Finally, you can also refresh yourself by listening to some enjoyable music to release your pressure.
Be brave enough to meet challenges in life. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear that you are feeling upset these days. It is quite common to feel a little anxious before the coming college entrance examination. My suggestions on how to handle your problems are as follows.
First of all, try to be cheerful and optimistic about the examination. Secondly, don’t stay up too late at night, for you can’t study efficiently if you are lack of sleep. Besides, you should work out every day. Never consider it a waste of time. On the contrary, it will rid you of tiredness and help you feel relaxed so that you can improve your efficiency in studies. It is also advisable to seek some advice from your teachers and parents. They will help you a lot with your study and daily life as well. Finally, you can refresh yourself by listening to some enjoyable music to release your pressure.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

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