题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I will share with you a story happened a few days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily,all of them got poisoned and had stomach aches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of dan?ger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole so?ciety pays more attention to food safety.
I will share with you a story that/ which happened或happening a few days ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to en?joy the snacks. Unluckily,all of them got poisoned and had stomach aches with their faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them and gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon after taking the medicine. This accident should make us、realize the se?riousness of the food safety problem. I strongly suggest that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.