题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中至多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend’s concert, organized and performing by the students of the Welsh Community College, was great success. The student had been practicing for months for the concert. They were excited that when they heard Gareth Jones was coming to present the prizes. Over 100 young performers play a mixture of jazz, classical or folk music. One of the highlights were 14-year-old Megan Evans, playing traditional Welsh folk songs. The concert ended with a very loud pop tune and anyone in the hall stood up and danced with the music. It was a magically atmosphere and a wonderful evening.
【答案】
【1】performing改为performed
【2】was后加a
【3】student改为students
【4】删除that
【5】play改为played
【6】or改为and
【7】were改为was
【8】anyone改为everyone
【9】with改为to
【10】magically改为magical
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于记叙文,讲述了上周末进行的一场由学生组织的音乐会的具体情况。
【1】performing改为performed 考查非谓语动词。动词perform与本句的主语last weekend’s concert构成被动关系,所以使用过去分词performed在句中做定语。
【2】was后加a 考查冠词。本句中的名词success由抽象名词,具体化为可数名词“成功的人/事”,前面可以使用a修饰。句意:由Welsh Community College学生组织并表演的音乐会取得巨大的成功。
【3】student改为students 考查名词单复数。根据常识可知一场音乐会应该由很多同学一起表演,所以使用可数名词复数形式。
【4】删除that 考查句子结构。本句中when引导的是时间状语从句,主句是They were excited,句中的that是多余的。句意:当他们听说Gareth Jones要来颁奖的时候,他们非常兴奋。
【5】play改为played 考查时态。本文讲述的是上周发生的事情,所以使用过去式played。
【6】or改为and 考查连词。连词or表示选择关系或用于否定句中表示并列。本句是肯定句所以使用and连接。句意:100多名学生表演了爵士、经典的和民间音乐。
【7】were改为was 考查主谓一致。本句的主语是one of the highlights,这是一个单数名词做主语,所以谓语动词使用单数形式。
【8】anyone改为everyone 考查代词。代词anyone通常用在疑问句和否定句中,或表示个体,而everyone用在肯定句中,表示整体。本句指所有人都站起来随着音乐跳舞,everyone表示整体。
【9】with改为to 考查固定搭配。短语to the music伴随着音乐。本句表示所有人都站起来随着音乐跳舞。
【10】magically改为magical 考查形容词。本句中使用形容词magical做定语修饰名词atmosphere,而副词magically通常在句中作状语,不能修饰名词。
【题目】根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。America’s holiday shopping season started on Black Friday, the day after Thanksgiving.【1】 Shoppers make the most money this time of year, about 20 percent to 30 percent of all revenue all year. About 136 million people shopped during the Thanksgiving Holiday weekend.【2】In an era of instant information, shoppers can use their mobile phones to find deals. Nearly 80 percent of this year’s holiday shoppers, or about 183.8 million people, shopped on Cyber Monday. 【3】 Online spending on Black Friday rose 15 percent to hit $2.7 billion this year. Cyber Monday spending increased 12 percent to $3 billion. NBC News reported that for many, shopping online was a more comfortable alternative than crowded malls.The shift to online shopping has had a big impact on solid shopping malls. Since 2010, more than 24 shopping malls have closed and an additional 60 are struggling. Fortune says the weakest of the malls have closed. However, the business in malls is thriving again, it adds. According to a survey, 94.2percent of malls were full with shops by the end of 2014. 【4】The average American consumer will spend about $805 on gifts. That’s about $630.5 billion between November and December – an increase of 3.7 percent from last year.【5】 That goes to China’s Singles’ Day, celebrated on November 11, which posted record sales of $14.3 billion in 2015.
A. More and more people shop online nowadays. |
B. That is the highest level in 27 years. |
C. It is the busiest shopping day of the year. |
D. One-in-five Americans used a tablet or smart-phone. |
E. The traditional mall industry can hardly survive. |
F. Cyber Monday falls on the Monday after Thanksgiving and Black Friday. |
G. Nonetheless, Cyber Monday is not the biggest online shopping day in the world. |