Question

随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对书写的重视程度降低了。据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的书写不好看，而他们又不想改善书写，其理由有很大差别。请根据下列表格写一篇120词左右的英语短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法。

可以用电脑写字	51.5%
没有时间练	32.3%
没有什么用	10.9%
其他	5.3%

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting.  51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.

As the saying goes, writing style shows the man.  Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.  Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

考点：图表类

点评：本文属于图表类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。