Question

【题目】书面表达

你是一名高中生，名叫李华。你的美国朋友Jack来信想了解你的家乡的著名景点莲花山，请你根据下表写信告诉他，信的开头和结尾已经给出。

注意：书信的开头和结尾已给出(不计入字数)；

作文字数： 100words左右，作文不要超过答题卷给定版面的范围。

莲花山	广东省风景名胜区
地点	位于番禺的东郊
面积	占地2.33平方公里
历史	始建于明朝1612年，已有近400年的历史
特色	1.景色优美，四周环湖 2.莲花山顶有一座观音像，高41米，目前是全世界最大的一尊佛像。 3.每年6～8月举办著名的莲花节

提示词：郊区：outskirt 观音像：a statue of the Goddess of Mercy

Dear Jack,

I have received your e-mail. Now I’m going to tell you something about the Lotus Hill.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Lotus Hill , located in the eastern outskirt of Panyu City, is a famous scenic spot in Guangdong. Covering an area of 2.33 square km and surrounded by lakes, it has a gorgeous landscape. With a history of 400 years, it was first built in 1612 in the Ming Dynasty. On the hill sits a statue of the Goddess of Mercy, 41 meters in height, which is the largest of its kind in the world. If you have a chance to visit Guangzhou, do remember to pay a visit to Lotus Hill, especially during June through August, when over 100 kinds of lotus flowers from different parts of China are on show.

【解析】

试题分析：你是一名高中生，名叫李华。你的美国朋友Jack来信想了解你的家乡的著名景点莲花山，请你根据下表写信告诉他，信的开头和结尾已经给出。注意：书信的开头和结尾已给出(不计入字数)；作文字数： 100words左右。莲花山： 广东省风景名胜区；地点：位于番禺的东郊；面积：占地2.33平方公里；历史：始建于明朝1612年，已有近400年的历史；特色：1.景色优美，四周环湖2.莲花山顶有一座观音像，高41米，目前是全世界最大的一尊佛像。3.每年6～8月举办著名的莲花节。

【亮点说明】文章条理清晰，要点突出，句式多样。Lotus Hill , located in the eastern outskirt of Panyu City, is a famous scenic spot in Guangdong.过去分词作定语；Covering an area of 2.33 square km and surrounded by lakes, it has a gorgeous landscape.现在分词和过去分词并列做原因状语；With a history of 400 years, it was first built in 1612 in the Ming Dynasty.被动语态用于其中；On the hill sits a statue of the Goddess of Mercy, 41 meters in height, which is the largest of its kind in the world.全部倒装和非限制性定语从句完美结合；If you have a chance to visit Guangzhou, do remember to pay a visit to Lotus Hill,条件句和强调谓语同现句中。