题目内容
【题目】假定你是学校花卉社团的社长李华。社团将于下周日在操场上举行花卉展览活动,请给交换生Bill写一封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动的主要内容;
3.期待他参加。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Bill,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bill,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Flower Association in our school. Knowing that you are interested in flowers, I am happily writing to invite you to join in the flower exhibition, which will be held in our school next Sunday.
Here are some details of the flower exhibition. The Flower Association will be the host to prepare most of the flowers on exhibition and other work, including the exhibition display of shelves and flowers. And a special area is purposely left for other students to show their flowers. Furthermore, two lectures about Chinese endangered or rare flowers will be given in the lecture hall too. I'm sure you can enjoy the beauty of flowers and learn a lot, so will you come?
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给交换生Bill,邀请他参加社团将于下周日在操场上举行花卉展览活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 时间和地点;
2. 活动的主要内容;
3. 期待他参加。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the Flower Association;be interested in;invite sb. to do sth.;the flower exhibition;be left for
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Flower Association in our school.
2. Knowing that you are interested in flowers, I am happily writing to invite you to join in the flower exhibition,
3. And a special area is purposely left for other students to show their flowers.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改