Question

短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
           2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

     It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east
while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive
up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she
was crossing the road. He fall with a cry. The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed going west.
I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After
two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
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Answer 1

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east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a 
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yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment 
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the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop 
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and drive off at full speed going west. I noticed the driver was∧young woman ∧wore a pair 
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of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passing car 
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and took the old man to the nearest hospital.