题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞; 2.郊区环境好
反对迁出： 1.建于1906年，中外闻名; 2.搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about _______________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，需要写出赞成迁出和反对迁出两种观点。赞成迁出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞; 2.郊区环境好。反对迁出： 1.建于1906年，中外闻名; 2.搬迁易造成动物死亡。写作时需要注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city用了现在完成时和状语从句。other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years是同位语从句。用了副词However，What’s more让层次更加分明。
