题目内容
假如你是李越,你的美国笔友Mike想了解你校新开设的选修课程《American history and culture》的情况,你向他作如下介绍:内容,目的,考核要求及你的感受。
注意:1、词数100-120;2、信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入总词数);
3、 选修课程----selective course
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely
Li Yue
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your letter asking about American history and culture, a selective course that we are taking at school. Here is something about it.
This course focuses on the key themes and periods in American history and how these have shaped modern American culture today, targeted at opening a window to dip into American history and culture. And our final grades are assessed based on involvement in class activities and performance in tests.
From the course, not only can we improve our skills in listening, speaking, reading and writing, but also it cultivates our ability to team with others. Obviously, we will benefit a lot from such a wonderful course and become a more learned person to fit in with the fast changing world. (125)
Yours sincerely
Li Yue
【解析】
试题分析:分析要求可知,假如你是李越,你的美国笔友Mike想了解你校新开设的选修课程《American history and culture》的情况,你向他作如下介绍:内容,目的,考核要求及你的感受。短文应该用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称。词数100-120左右,不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体,篇章结构,语言表达的连贯性和地道性。主要是在第三(15-19)和第四档(20-25),第五档26分以上要控制。
【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如:targeted at引导的非谓语 、that引导的定语从句、not only引导的倒装句,fit in with等都很不错。
考点:书信类作文。
Frederick M. Hess is the director of education policy studies at the American Enterprise Institute, which is a nonprofit organization that conducts research on many public issues. He says that a long summer vacation doesn’t make sense in today’s world.
Can American students afford to take a summer vacation? In a summer vacation, millions of kids spend valuable time sending messages, watching TV, playing video games and doing shopping in the mall. They will also be putting their academic futures at risk.
Summer vacation once made sense in the past when you didn’t need an education to get a good job. But now things have changed. For today’s students, academic skills are important to students’future success, but such skills are affected in the summertime. Many nations don’t give kids an American-style summer vacation. They offer no more than seven consecutive(连续的) weeks of vacation. Most American school districts offer up to thirteen weeks. To compete in the global marketplace, Americans must be prepared to go up against international competitors.
Summer vacation also causes challenges for today’s families. In the 1960s, more than 60% of families had a stay-at-home Mom. Now two-thirds of American children live in households where every adult works. For these families, summer vacation can be more burden than break. Someone must watch the kids.
But the biggest problem may be how summer vacation hurts academic achievement. Researchers have found that disadvantaged students lose significant ground in the summertime.
A longer school year does not have to be an invitation to hard boring work. Rather, it should allow time-pressed teachers to conduct richer and more imaginative lessons. Schools would have more time to devote to athletics, languages, music and the arts. Summer vacation can be a grand thing. But in the 21st century, it may also be outdated.
Title: Summer Vacation
Theme | A long summer vacation isn’t 1. in today’s world. | |
Basic Information | 2. length | 13 weeks in most American schools |
Students’ 3. | ·Sending messages and watching TV ·Playing video games ·Doing shopping | |
Disadvantages | · 4. student’s academic skills and putting academic futures at risk. ·Being a 5. to families for they have to watch kids. ·Hurting students’ academic achievement and resulting in 6. significant ground. | |
Suggestion | A longer school year does not have to 7. to hard boring work. Richer and more imaginative lessons should be 8. , such as athletics, languages, music and the arts. | |
9. | Though being a ground thing, summer vacation might be out of 10. in the 21st century. | |