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15．第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The person who touched me most is an unknown lady．I study in a city school but lives in a village 15kilometers away．One afternoon，I receive a call from my family saying my mom was serious ill．I hurried to the bus station，only find the last bus had left．Feel anxious，I decided to walk home．On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me that I needed help．Worried about being cheated，I said anything．But she was such sincere that I finally accepted her offer．When we reached my village，it was dark．Seeing her car out of the sight．I was in tear．Whenever I think of her，I always feel grateful．
分析 本文作者介绍的是令自己最感动的人---一位素不相识的女士的故事．
解答 The person who touched me most is an unknown lady．I study in a city school but lives
in a village 15kilometers away．One afternoon，I receive a call from my family saying
my mom was serious ill．I hurried to the bus station，only∧find the last bus had left．Feel
anxious，I decided to walk home．On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me that
I needed help．Worried about being cheated，I said anything．But she was such sincere that
I finally accepted her offer．When we reached my village，it was dark．Seeing her car out of
the sight．I was in tear．Whenever I think of her，I always feel grateful．
详解：
1．lives 改为 live 考查时态及主谓一致 本句是由but连接的两个表示转折关系的并列句，故前后两个句子的时态应保持一致，所以此处也应使用一般现在时；由于主语I为第一人称；故用live．
2．receive改为received 考查时态 此处在句中作谓语，根据时间状语One afternoon可知，此处指的是发生在一天下午的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用received．
3．serious改为seriously 考查副词 此处用来修饰形容词ill，故用副词seriously．
4．find前加to 考查动词不定式 此处在句中作结果状语，表达的是意想不到的结果，应使用动词不定式形式；故在find前加to．
5．Feel改为Feeling 考查现在分词 此处用在句首作原因状语，由于动词feel与其逻辑主语I是主动关系，故用现在分词Feeling．
6．that 改为if/whether 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是：在路上，一辆车停了下来，司机问我是否需要帮助；此处用来引导宾语从句，意为：是否，故用if/whether．
7．anything改为nothing 考查句意理解以及不定代词 本句的意思是：由于担心被骗，所以我什么也没说；anything通常用于否定句或一般疑问句中，意为：任何东西；nothing表达的是否定意义：没有东西，没有什么；此处指的是什么也没说；故用nothing．
8．such改为so 考查so与such的区别 such 是形容词，修饰名词或名词词组；so是副词，只能修饰形容词或副词；此处用来修饰形容词sincere；故用so．
9．去掉the 考查固定短语 out of sight意为：看不见；故去掉of之后的the．
10．tear改为tears 固定搭配 in tears 意为：流着泪，含泪，哭；故用tears．
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．
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| 47．A．hoping | B．pretending | C．picturing | D．believing |
| 48．A．when | B．if | C．although | D．since |
| 49．A．deaf | B．special | C．strange | D．blind |
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| 51．A．what | B．why | C．unless | D．which |
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| 54．A．For | B．So | C．But | D．And |
| 55．A．calm | B．enthusiastic | C．sad | D．nervous |
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| 43．A．training | B．board | C．teaching | D．equipment |
| 44．A．between | B．during | C．over | D．through |
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