Question

4．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）"，请根据自己对这句话的理解按下列要求用英语写一篇短文．
要求：
1．意义
2．事例
3．感想
注意：1．词数不少于100；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
A well-known proverb goes that"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．，which i think means helping others is helping ourselves．（点明意义）
（开头写事例）I can well remember that three weeks ago my classmates and i went to help a lonely old couple do some housework before the Spring Festival．Upon arrival，we set out to help wash the windows and mop the floor．We also stuck some beautiful paper-cuts on the window to add to the festival atmosphere．They were so happy and were smiling all the time．（高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
In my opinion，（发表感想）helping others not only benefits the receiver but also the giver．Therfore，one should always be ready to help others．．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．
该句型使用来as引导的倒装句，意思是尽管我们很累，但是我们很高兴．将tired提前倒装起到强调的作用．
（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
句子里hearing what we did是现在分词做状语，相当于一个时间状语从句；which引导一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子．
高级词汇短语：Upon arrival 一…就…；set out to do开始做某事； most impotantly更重要的是；not only…but also 不仅而且；be ready to 准备做某事．

解答 A well-known proverb goes that"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．，which i think means helping others is helping ourselves．（点明意义）
    （开头写事例）I can well remember that three weeks ago my classmates and i went to help a lonely old couple do some housework before the Spring Festival．Upon arrival，we set out to help wash the windows and mop the floor．We also stuck some beautiful paper-cuts on the window to add to the festival atmosphere．They were so happy and were smiling all the time．（高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
    In my opinion，（发表感想）helping others not only benefits the receiver but also the giver．Therfore，one should always be ready to help others．

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