题目内容
小伟减肥以后,感到身体疲倦、虚弱,不知如何是好,于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康专家求教。请根据下面内容,以小伟的名义写一封邮件。词数100以上。
原因:觉得自己太胖,体重不断增加,担心形象不美,有同学骂他。
过程:
1、去健身房,两三次就放弃了,感觉太累也没时间。
2、节食,坚持了大约一个星期,经常饿得不能继续他的学习。
3、悄悄服用减肥药,一开始有效果,体重迅速下降,但减肥药对他产生副作用。
Dear Health Expert,
I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. I feel I am a little too fat. What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates call me names.
At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Shortly after, they did work and I was losing weight fast. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes.
I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?
Best wishes
Xiao Wei
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇书信写作,首先要注意格式规范和正确。开头要有称呼,结尾要落款。书信的内容写信者小伟向健康专家求救。说明自己的肥胖问题和现在面临的身体问题。所以对于问题原因和过程的描述,尽量真实具体,以便于健康专家给予合理有效的建议。时态:用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【亮点说明】文章使用ask for your help,What’s worse,put on weight,be worried about,work out,give up,go on a diet,Shortly after,losie weight,have bad effects on等词组和短语,使得文章更加生动。叙述过程的时候,使用At one time,Once,Then,Shortly after说明顺序,使得文章条理清晰,表达准确。However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies.使用so…that…句型,表示“如此…以致…”,使得文章句式灵活多样。文章开头使用I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help.直接说明写信目的;结尾处使用Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?表达自己的请求。
考点:考查书信写作