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12．假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有
10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently，our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends．Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of the free time to review the lessons we had learnt．Some others are against the opinion，saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays．The rest agree with neither of the opinion．They have the view which keeping the balance between work and play are both important for us．They suggest one day of the weekend should used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest．

分析 最近学校就周末中学生是否上课进行了一次意义深刻的大讨论，同学们有点认为周末上课可以充分利用业余时间复习学过的东西，有点同学认为
周末应该好好休息，以便能更有效地学习；还有的同学对这两种观点都不同意，他们建议利用周末其中的一天学习，另一天可以做一些有趣的事情或
者休息．

解答 Recently，our school has held themeaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends．
                                              a      
Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of the free time to review the lessons we
                                                                                                                                    full
had learnt．Some others are against the opinion，saying we had batter to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during
have                                                                                             去掉to                                                                        effectively
the weekdays．The rest agree with neither of the opinion．They have the view which keeping the balance between work and play are both
                                                                       opinions                                that                                                                    is
 important for us．They suggest one day of the weekend should∧used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested
or have a rest．                                                                     be                                                                                                 interesting
1．the改为a；考查冠词的用法，定冠词the表示的是特指，不定冠词a/an表示泛指，这里用a泛指"一次有意义的讨论"．
2．fully改为full；考查形容词，这里用形容词full来修饰名词use，构成词组make full use of，意为"充分利用"．
3．had改为have；考查动词的时态，本文用的是现在时态，所以这句也应用现在的某种时态，结合句意"充分利用业余时间复习我们学习过的东西"可
    知，这里应该用现在完成时．
4．去掉to；考查固定搭配，"最好做某事"用"had batter do"．
5．effective改为effectively；考查副词，这里用副词修饰前面的动词work．
6．opinion改为opinions；考查名词复数，结合上下文分析句子，句意为"其余的对这两个观点都不同意"，所以要用复数形式．
7．which改为that；考查同位语从句，在这里that作为连词引导从句作view的同位语．
8．are改为is；考查系动词，这里句子的主语是动名词短语 keeping the balance between work and play，所以系动词用单数形式．
9．should后面加be；考查动词的语态，结合上下文分析句子，主语one day of the weekend 和动词used是被动关系，所以在used前面加be构成被动语态．
10．interested改为interesting；考查分词做形容词，现在分词做形容词修饰物，说明事物的性质；过去分词作形容词修饰人，描述人的心理感受；这里用现在分词
      作形容词修饰不定代词something．

点评 在短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在并加以改正．

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