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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
       2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear John,
I'm delighted that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation.You asked many question    in your letter,and now let me answer them.
Beijing,the capital of China,is attractive city with a long history.You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing,of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.I hope we will enjoy it.Besides,there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City.These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year.I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
LiMing.

分析 本文为中国人李明写给他的外国朋友约翰的一封信.李明向约翰介绍了北京的文化、美食及各种景点,并对约翰的到来表示欢迎.

解答 Dear John,
I'm delighted that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation.You asked many question in your letter,
                                                                                                                            questions 
and now let me answer them.
Beijing,the capital of China,is∧attractive city with a long history.You can found all kinds of delicious fo
                                                an                                                                 find
od in Beijing,of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.I hope we will enjoy it.Besides,there i
                        which                                                                         you                                         are
s a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace or the Forb
                                                                                                                                               and
idden City.These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year.I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
wonderful
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
                               hearing
Yours,
LiMing.
解析:
1.many question  in your letter 改为questions 考查名词.因为question 前有many修饰,所以用复数.
 2.is∧attractive city 加 an.考查冠词.这里的city指北京,所以用单数,表示一个吸引人的城市,用不定冠词,attractive元音开头,所以用an.
3.You can found  all kinds of 改为 find.考查情态动词.情态动词后用动词原形,一起做谓语.
4.of that the most famous改为which.考查关系词.定语从句中介词后面用which
5.I hope we will enjoy it.改为you.考查代词.根据上文可知这句是指"我希望你喜欢",前后人称一致,所以用you.           
6.there  is  a great of number 改为are.考查主谓一致.该句是倒装句,主语是a great number of tourist attractions,所以用are.
7.the Summer Palace or 改为 and.考查连词.这句里 the Great Wall,the Summer Palace 和the Forbidden City是并列关系,所以用and.           
8.millions of tourists in this year 删除in.考查介词.this year 前面不用介词.                              
9.have a wonderfully  time 改为wonderful.考查形容词和副词.修饰名词time 用形容词.
10 l forward to hear from you改为hearing.考查非谓语动词.短语looking forward to表示"盼着",to是介词,所以后面用doing.

点评 考查短文改错
在定语从句中,which 和that 在指代事物时,一般可以互换使用,但并非在任何情况下都是这样,定语从句中宜用which而不宜用that 的情况:
①当关系代词的前面有介词时.
②在非限制性定语从句中.
③在一个句子中有两个定语从句,其中一个定语从句的关系代词用了that,另一个宜用which.
④当关系代词后面带有插入语时.
⑤先行词本身是that,宜用which.
⑥先行词是those+复数名词.

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