Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。 

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词； 

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One   

day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father /\ the money.   But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month  after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on later gave my own bicycle.

Answer 1

friend---friends

it—one

that---which

the money前加for

He----I

if---when

after---later

gives---gave

去掉happy前的much.

解析:

考查名词数的变化。Most of 决定了名词必须用复数形式。

考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。

考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.

考查介词用法。此处ask my father的目的应该是钱。ask my father与 the money之间需要加表目的的介词。

考查代词用法。由前句he said he could only give me half of the money. 和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为I.

考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。

考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。