Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你上星期六参加了去敬老院（nursing home）的社会实践活动，请你给在英国的笔友Cindy写信，给她介绍这次活动及你的感受。书信的内容要点如下：

1. 活动目的（关爱老人、了解社会等）；

2. 活动内容（陪老人聊天、表演等）；

3. 你的感受。

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语及结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

Dear Cindy,

I am writing to share with you the social activity organized by our school last Saturday.

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Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Cindy,

I am writing to share with you the social activity organized by our school last Saturday.

In order to show our care about the elderly and learn more about the society, the students went to the nursing home. After we got there, we were divided into different groups. Some of us did cleaning for the elderly, and some others talked with them. My group members sang and danced for the old people, who were very happy to watch our performance. This is a really wonderful experience for me, from which I learned that I should respect and spend more time with my grandparents to make them happy. Do you have such kind of activities? Tell me about that if you do.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给在英国的笔友Cindy写信，向她介绍上周六去敬老院参加社会时间活动以及感受。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，包括活动内容、目的和感受。(2)人称使用恰当。(3)时态：一般过去式为主（上周六的活动）。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：多次使用非限制性定语从句My group members sang and danced for the old people, who were very happy to watch our performance.（我们的组员为老人们唱歌跳舞，看着我们的表演他们很开心）；This is a really wonderful experience for me, from which I learned that I should respect and spend more time with my grandparents to make them happy.（对我来说，这是一次非常有意义的经历，我从中学到了我应该尊重祖父母并多花些时间和他们在一起让他们开心）。2.使用了重要短语：be divided into被分成，learn from向…学习，从…获得。