题目内容
近年微博(microblog)在中国越来越流行,2011年也被有关媒体称为“微博元年”。假设你是校报记者,请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。
1. 非常方便,人们可以随时利用微博来表达心声,交流想法。
2. 给人们提供了一种释放压力的方式。
3. 与朋友分享心情,增进他们之间的了解。
4. 也有潜在的危险,有可能泄露个人隐私或其他重要信息。
5. 综上所述,使用微博要谨慎。
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。(第一句已经给出,但不计入总句数)
提示词:隐私privacy
Microblog has become part of our life.
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Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information.
All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.
解析这是一篇要点作文,写作的要求,必须用5句话表达完所有的信息内容,并且不能删减或添加任何信息点。这不仅需要一定的词汇量和句型表达能力,还要有处理句子拆分整合句子的能力。作文好比建筑物,如果说词汇是构成一篇作文的砖块,那么5大基本句型就是作文的框架。实际上,整篇作文就是五大基本句型的延伸和变化。掌握好词汇和句型是写好一篇基础写作的根本,否则就只是一堆堆由孤立词汇呆板组合的中式英语,没有英语逻辑,更无章可循。句子与句子之间的衔接,叫做过渡。如何过渡,也是一门学问,巧用过渡词可以使原本不相关的句子衔接、连贯。玉不琢不成器,作文完成之后还要再反复推敲琢磨,适当使用非谓语结构、同位语,介词短语、复合句、倒装结构使文章简洁、高档,更具渲染力。It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time.就是不定式的用法。