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2．假如你是王华，是星光中学的学生会主席．最近你校李平同学的母亲被查出肺癌，治疗需要大笔费用．但他家较贫困，也面临辍学．现请你写一封倡议书，号召全体同学伸出援助之手，帮助李平同学的家庭渡过难关．
注意：1．词数：100左右； 
 2．倡议书的开头为你拟好，不计入总词数．
Dear fellow students．
As we all know，Li Ping is very excellent student in our school．He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．
Yours，
Wang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇倡议书作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，关键是要向大家发出倡议，帮助这位同学．写作时运用一般现在时态，人称使用第三人称和第一人称，内容要点包括：李平同学的母亲被查出肺癌，治疗需要大笔费用．但他家较贫困，也面临辍学；最后作为学生会主席，发出倡议，号召全体同学伸出援助之手，帮助李平同学的家庭渡过难关．本文分为两个段落即可，第一段介绍李萍的情况，第二段发出倡议．
重要的短语和句型：
be highly thought of受到高度评价              spare no efforts to do 不遗余力的做某事 
be diagnosed with被诊断为                     give sb a hand 帮某人一个忙
As far as I'm concerned据我所知              call on sb to do sth号召某人做某事
recover herself from康复                     make a difference产生影响 
What's worse更糟糕的是
As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．
本句为as引导的非限制性定语从句，同义表达还可以用As is known to us all．
If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
本句为一主从复合句，if引导的一个条件状语从句，there is no doubt that为一常用句型，毫无疑问，…．that引导的为一同位语从句，是对doubt的解释说明．

解答 Dear fellow students，
      As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．（高分句型）He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．（高分句型）（介绍李萍的基本学习及家庭情况）
      As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．（高分句型）Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．（发出倡议）
                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Wang Hua

点评 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．