Question

假定你是李华，是一位高中生。iPad已经成为你们中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐，阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容要包括以下要点：

1. 积极因素；

2. 负面影响；

3. 看法建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

I'm a senior high school student, named Li Hua.

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Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I'm a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it's fashionable for young students to have iPads. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them. Obviously, it's of great help with our studies, especially with our English listening skills.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom listening to music with earphones, and some even playing video games, which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.

In my opinion, the classroom is a place to study, and concentration is terribly needed. Therefore, we should make good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons. Meanwhile, schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。写作要点包括：积极因素；负面影响；看法和建议三个方面。词数在100词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：现在分词表伴随状况①Using an iPad，②listening to music with earphones；定语从句which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用nowadays, obviously, especially, however, therefore, meanwhile等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了listen to, of great help, in my opinion, make good use of, help with等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：书信类作文