Question

【题目】假设你是光明中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到蓝天希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

1. 个人优势（如性格、语言能力等）。

2. 辅导计划

注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：

蓝天希望小学LantianHopeSchool 小学生pupil

DearSirorMadam,

IamLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo._________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

YoursSincerely,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Lantian Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, and I’m independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position. I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一封申请信，考查的是学生在实际生活中对英语的应用能力。写作时应注意：信件的格式；要点要齐全；时态要使用准确，关键的词语和句型要写正确，可以适当的运用高级词汇和特殊句型，但是应避免犯低级错误，注意卷面整洁，行文流畅。

【范文亮点】

文中运用了substantial ；coach ；proficient；coaching；opportunity等专业的词汇，使文章看起来专业且能让人眼前一亮,印象深刻。

文中运用了as far as；be good for ；be independent in；be proficient in；What’s more 等短语增加了文章的亮点。

文中使用了I believe to ...；I am qualified for ...；I’m independent in...； What’s more important is...等句型，使文章连贯又有特色。

3.文中用了which引导的定语从句which thus will result in substantial social benefits以及because I have good character, and I’m independent in life and proficient in English的并列句，运用复杂的句式使文章更加丰富生动。