Question

【题目】假如你是李华，高考（college entrance examination）前夕，你校组织高一、高二学生为高三学生加油助威活动。请你根据以下提示写一份关于此次活动的英文报道。

1. 活动时间和地点；2. 活动过程；3. 你的感想。

注表；1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】As the CEE is approaching, a yearly activity named “Come on Senior Three” was held on our school playground on the afternoon of May 30th. All teachers and students from Senior One and Senior Two all participated in the event. The principal, one teacher and one student made three wonderful and inspiring speeches, after which all the teachers and students sang songs together and they all had a great time.

This kind of activity is a great way to deal with study pressure for Senior 3 students, for they can get away from their daily routine for a moment and get relaxed and refreshed. Therefore with the pressure gone, I think they will do well in the examination.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份为高一、高二学生为高三学生加油助威活动的英文报道。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇报道，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：yearly activity ；inspiring speeches；study pressure等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 The principal, one teacher and one student made three wonderful and inspiring speeches, after which all the teachers and students sang songs together and they all had a great time.，This kind of activity is a great way to deal with study pressure for Senior 3 students, for they can get away from their daily routine for a moment and get relaxed and refreshed. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。