题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn’t the hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is much beautiful than the outcome.”
I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesn’t matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again do I believe I can catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.
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【解析】
本文为记叙文。讲述了作者曾经是一个讨厌运动的人,但当开始打棒球后,就被这项运动吸引了。
第一处,考查时态。此处讲述作者过去的习惯,用一般过去时,故将hates改为hated。
第二处,考查被动语态。这里指作者被这项运动吸引,作谓语,表示被动,故在attracted前was。
第三处,考查冠词。对“我”来说这是一个很难的过程,表泛指,应用不定冠词,故将the改为a。
第四处,考查非谓语动词。由其前的介词of可知,此处应用动名词形式作宾语,故将work改为working。
第五处,考查定语从句。先行词为the time,在定语从句中作spent的宾语,因此it多余,应去掉。
第六处,考查比较级,根据其后的than可知此处为比较级,故在beautiful前加more,或者将much改为more。
第七处,考查并列连词。根据前后句意逻辑可知,此处为并列顺承关系,故将but改为and。
第八处,考查介词。作“通过某种方式”讲时,应用介词b y,故将with改为b y。
第九处,考查名词复数。根据句意逻辑,此处应用复数形式,故将player改为players。
第十处,考查代词。此处作宾语,用代词宾格,故将myself改为me。