Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；不按要求方式改的不给分！

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Walter’s goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study —in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths. Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became good at it. However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate like planned. Walter learned a good lesson.

Answer 1

1.was后加to

2.successfully-successful

3.study-studies

4.it-them

5.beside-besides

6.去掉been

7.fails-failed

8.in-at

9.But-So

10.like-as

【解析】

1.小题1】“目标是”解释内容，be动词后用to do结构，因此was后加to。

2.小题2】形容词修饰名词，因此successfully-successful。

3.小题3】各科学业，应该用名词复数形式study-studies。

4.小题4】代词是指代复数名词“科目”。因此it-them。

5.小题5】besides“另外；除此之外”，beside“旁边”，根据句意因此beside-besides。

6.小题6】他已经选择的，是主动关系，去掉been。

7.小题7】通篇是一般过去时，因此现在时fails-failed 。

8.小题8】at the end of，“在….之末” 介词in-at。

9.小题9】因此他不得不重新学习，前后是因果关系。But-So。

10.小题10】按照计划，like是介词“像”。因此like-as。

考点：短文改错