Question

【题目】短文改错

下面这篇短文共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the development of the Internet, more and more people send ecards instead paper ones when an important holiday comes.

Comparing with the traditional cards, ecards are more interested.Besides, it is faster to send an ecard.The next advantage is that there are many web site online in which there are many cards for you to choose from. Final, with the popularity of ecards, more paper is used in making paper cards, that does good to our environment.

In the short, there are many advantages of using ecards. I hoped that sending greetings by using ecards will be accepted by more people, not only the young one.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】instead和paper之间加of

【2】Comparing改为Compared

【3】interested改为interesting

【4】site改为sites

【5】 Final改为Finally

【6】more改为less

【7】逗号后的that改为which

【8】in the short去掉the

【9】hoped改为hope

【10】one改为ones

【解析】

【1】instead和paper之间加of 考查固定短语。Instead of 代替；

【2】Comparing改为Compared 考查非谓语动词 。be compared with 与。。比较；

【3】interested改为interesting 考查形容词。Interested 用来修饰人，interesting用来修饰物；

【4】site改为sites 考查名词的复数。Many 后面用可数名词的复数形式

【5】 Final改为Finally 考查副词。句意：最后，随着电子贺卡的受欢迎，不再用纸在纸制贺卡上，这有利于环境保护。

【6】more改为less 考查句意理解。句意：最后，随着电子贺卡的受欢迎，不再用纸在纸制贺卡上，这有利于环境保护

【7】逗号后的that改为which 考查定语从句，which代指这件事，非限制性定语从句；

【8】in the short去掉the 考查介词短语。In short 总之。

【9】hoped改为hope 考查动词的时态。根据上句话提到In the short, there are many advantages of using ecards可知用一般现在时；

【10】one改为ones 考查代词。句意：我希望用电子贺卡送祝福被越来越多的人接受，不仅仅是年轻人。

考点 ：短文改错。