Question

3．如图两张照片被传到网上后，在全国引起轰动．两个普通环卫工人的事迹感动了中国．请简要描述这两张照片，并谈谈你的感想（至少两点）．文章的开头已经给出．

参考词汇：被水浸透的water-soaked
要求：字数150左右．
Looking around us，we may surprisingly find that some people are not ordinary as we thought．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
They were the third pair that she had ever changed．这是她曾换下来的第三双（被水浸透的袜子）．
本句为定语从句；先行词"the third pair"在该从句中作宾语，由于其中含有序数词"the third"，故用关系代词that．
句型二：
I will regard devotion as ①my goal in life，having②more diligence and fewer complaints．我将把奉献作为我的人生目标，要多些勤奋和少些抱怨．
①regard…as意为：当做，把…认作；
②此处为现在分词作方式状语，动词have与其逻辑主语I构成主动关系．

解答 Looking around us，we may surprisingly find that some people are not ordinary as we thought．
On the afternoon of the first day of the Spring Festival，a female cleaner leaned against the wall，taking off her water-soaked socks．They were the third pair that she had ever changed．【高分句型一】In order to clear the road of snow to make sure of pedestrians'safety，she had worked for a whole day．（对第一幅图的描述）
Every night always witness a grey-haired cleaner seated in the doorway of a shop．She is reading attentively by the light of the shop，lost to bitter cold and the noisy world．It is obvious that she wants to equip herself with knowledge to keep pace with the times of rapid development．（对第二幅图的描述）
The two photos of average cleaners have moved China．How great Chinese cleaners are！They work hard and never complain，though they do tough jobs； they are thirsty for knowledge and have a noble mental world．（赞美了环卫工人的可贵之处）
The two photos also have touched my heart．I will regard devotion as my goal in life，having more diligence and fewer complaints．【高分句型二】Meanwhile，I appeal to the whole society to respect cleaners'labor，and to government to improve their working and living conditions．（谈论感想，呼吁全社会都要尊重环卫工人的劳动，并希望政府能改善他们的工作和生活条件）

点评 本题提供的是图画，主要考查考生的观察力、思考力以及表达能力；因此要求考生应结合题目的要求，看懂了意思之后再进行写作；具体做法是：首先，根据图画内容整理出几个要点，再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式，包括确定文中的人称，时态以及选用相应的句式结构，并且还要写出自己的看法或感受．