题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来山东旅游,发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列要点给他回信。
1.介绍山东景点;
2.体验齐鲁文化;
3.推荐交通工具。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to learn that you are planning to visit Shandong with your parents in July. I’m writing to offer some information.
Shandong is a great province with a long history and splendid cultures. There are many tourist attractions, such as Mountain Tai and the Former Residence of Confucius. While travelling, you can experience colorful Qilu cultures, learning about many influential philosophers of Ancient China. Besides, you’d better go to Qingdao, which is a beautiful coastal city.
As for transportation, the high speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant. If you want to explore a city, shared bikes are worth using.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是1.介绍山东景点;2.体验齐鲁文化;3.推荐交通工具。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,内容符合要求,结构布局合理,文章使用高级句子。There are many tourist attractions, such as Mountain Tai and the Former Residence of Confucius.使用there be 句型;While travelling, you can experience colorful Qilu cultures, learning about many influential philosophers of Ancient China.现在分词做状语;you’d better go to Qingdao, which is a beautiful coastal city.which引导非限制性定语从句;If you want to explore a city, shared bikes are worth using.if引导条件状语从句;另外,Besides, As for transportation,等的使用为文章增色添彩。
【题目】根据下列表格中的内容,写一则旅行日记
时间 | 9月5日,星期六,天气晴朗 |
地点 | 天涯海角 (Ultima Thule) |
抵达方式 | 乘校车 |
出发时间 | 上午7点20分 |
到达时间 | 上午9点半 |
活动内容 | 上午:在沙滩上做游戏,去游泳,在饭店吃午饭 下午:用英语讲故事比赛,颁奖,照相 |
返回时间 | 下午5点半 |
注意:1. 表格中所列内容不得遗漏,要意思连贯,表达清楚。
2. 不要逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 词数:100词左右 比赛hold a contest, 奖品prize
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